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withimpunityTitle: You Ever Noticed How Homoerotic This Whole Thing Is?
Pairing: Brad/Ray
Rating: Porn!
Words: 684
A/n: Written for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
hard_death for the Fandom Free for All. Brad/Ray or Brad/Nate/Ray w/o the sense that Brad's settling for Ray because he can't have Nate or is taking pity on him or is just using him.
Disclaimer: Not true, no offense intended, entirely fiction pulled from the depths of my warped mind.
Brad’s a little gay. He likes girls too, but if someone held a hot chick and a hot guy up and asked him to choose, he’d probably end up picking the one with the cock. Flat stomach, layer of dark, scratchy stubble under their neck, muscles flexing and quivering underneath his fingertips. That’s what he likes.
Plus, its like Poke says. This Marine crap, its all way homo-erotic. How do they expect them not to fuck each other in the ass when the corp has them shower together, lift weights together, get on a mat and wrestle half naked together, grunting and breathing and basically dry humping each other? It’s like they’re challenging them. Look, but don’t touch. Fuck that, Brad follows his own rules. Especially when it concerns his dick getting sucked by his hotass RTO.
“Taste like fucking green skittles,” Brad complains, pulls back to look at Ray and licks his lips. What he doesn’t say is, “and my come, I wanna lick the taste of it out of your mouth.” Brad’s a cocky motherfucker, so yeah, he likes to taste himself. It makes him hard when he kisses Ray’s smart ass mouth, pokes his tongue in the corner and gets the bitter tang of come in his mouth. Mostly because it makes him think about how Ray looked with his knees in the dirt and his mouth stretched around his cock, fucking moaning for it, fingers digging into Brad’s ass just asking him to fuck his mouth, and Brad always gives Ray what he wants.
“Gonna fuck you one day,” Brad says, teeth pulling at one of Ray’s ears as he digs the heel of his hand down on the bulge in Ray’s cami’s. Ray groans and bites down on his shoulder hard. “Gonna strip you down and put you on your stomach and fucking lick you open, Ray. You’d like that, wouldn’t you?”
“Fuck, Brad,” Ray pants breathlessly, hips jerking forward into Brad’s hand as he shoves it inside his pants and gets a good grip on his dick. He smears the wetness oozing from the tip with his thumb and Ray kisses him, just to keep the noises that threaten to come up down. Brad sucks Ray’s tongue into his mouth as Ray fucks his hand, hot breath escaping his mouth. Brad’s almost licked all the come and skittles out of his mouth by now and he just tastes like Ray.
“You want me to fuck you, Ray?” He asks sweetly, pressing open mouth kisses to Ray’s jaw, tightening his grip around Ray’s cock to add more friction to his rapid thrusting. “Want me to stretch you wide and bury my cock inside of you. God, I wanna hear you scream.”
“Yeah, yeah, fuck,” Ray swears, twisting Brad’s vest between his fingers as his hips jerk forward and Brad feels hot come spilling between his fingers and Ray’s thighs. Brad raises his hand to his mouth and licks a stripe up the center of his palm, then crushes Ray’s mouth, rolling his hips against Ray’s, knowing it must drive his sensitive cock crazy.
“You are so hot when you come for me,” Brad whispers and sucks the rest of his fingers into his mouth. Ray groans and leans forward, wrapping his fingers around Brad’s wrists and brings Brad’s hand to his own mouth, flicking his tongue out, tasting himself on Brad.
“Fucking christ,” Brad murmurs, watching in awe as Ray sucks his fingers into his mouth, two at a time, cleaning his own come off of them. When Ray finally finishes, Brad’s eyes are completely dark and Ray would think he wasn’t breathing if it wasn’t for the occasional rise of his chest.
“Soon,” he wraps his fingers around the back of Ray’s neck and kisses him. It’s not a promise, it’s a motherfucking guarantee. War or no war, he’s going to be inside Ray soon or he’s going to go insane.
Brad smiles as Ray silently stumbles off in the darkness back to his own grave. At least he found a way to shut him up.
Pairing: Brad/Ray
Rating: Porn!
Words: 684
A/n: Written for
hard_death for the Fandom Free for All. Brad/Ray or Brad/Nate/Ray w/o the sense that Brad's settling for Ray because he can't have Nate or is taking pity on him or is just using him.Disclaimer: Not true, no offense intended, entirely fiction pulled from the depths of my warped mind.
Brad’s a little gay. He likes girls too, but if someone held a hot chick and a hot guy up and asked him to choose, he’d probably end up picking the one with the cock. Flat stomach, layer of dark, scratchy stubble under their neck, muscles flexing and quivering underneath his fingertips. That’s what he likes.
Plus, its like Poke says. This Marine crap, its all way homo-erotic. How do they expect them not to fuck each other in the ass when the corp has them shower together, lift weights together, get on a mat and wrestle half naked together, grunting and breathing and basically dry humping each other? It’s like they’re challenging them. Look, but don’t touch. Fuck that, Brad follows his own rules. Especially when it concerns his dick getting sucked by his hotass RTO.
“Taste like fucking green skittles,” Brad complains, pulls back to look at Ray and licks his lips. What he doesn’t say is, “and my come, I wanna lick the taste of it out of your mouth.” Brad’s a cocky motherfucker, so yeah, he likes to taste himself. It makes him hard when he kisses Ray’s smart ass mouth, pokes his tongue in the corner and gets the bitter tang of come in his mouth. Mostly because it makes him think about how Ray looked with his knees in the dirt and his mouth stretched around his cock, fucking moaning for it, fingers digging into Brad’s ass just asking him to fuck his mouth, and Brad always gives Ray what he wants.
“Gonna fuck you one day,” Brad says, teeth pulling at one of Ray’s ears as he digs the heel of his hand down on the bulge in Ray’s cami’s. Ray groans and bites down on his shoulder hard. “Gonna strip you down and put you on your stomach and fucking lick you open, Ray. You’d like that, wouldn’t you?”
“Fuck, Brad,” Ray pants breathlessly, hips jerking forward into Brad’s hand as he shoves it inside his pants and gets a good grip on his dick. He smears the wetness oozing from the tip with his thumb and Ray kisses him, just to keep the noises that threaten to come up down. Brad sucks Ray’s tongue into his mouth as Ray fucks his hand, hot breath escaping his mouth. Brad’s almost licked all the come and skittles out of his mouth by now and he just tastes like Ray.
“You want me to fuck you, Ray?” He asks sweetly, pressing open mouth kisses to Ray’s jaw, tightening his grip around Ray’s cock to add more friction to his rapid thrusting. “Want me to stretch you wide and bury my cock inside of you. God, I wanna hear you scream.”
“Yeah, yeah, fuck,” Ray swears, twisting Brad’s vest between his fingers as his hips jerk forward and Brad feels hot come spilling between his fingers and Ray’s thighs. Brad raises his hand to his mouth and licks a stripe up the center of his palm, then crushes Ray’s mouth, rolling his hips against Ray’s, knowing it must drive his sensitive cock crazy.
“You are so hot when you come for me,” Brad whispers and sucks the rest of his fingers into his mouth. Ray groans and leans forward, wrapping his fingers around Brad’s wrists and brings Brad’s hand to his own mouth, flicking his tongue out, tasting himself on Brad.
“Fucking christ,” Brad murmurs, watching in awe as Ray sucks his fingers into his mouth, two at a time, cleaning his own come off of them. When Ray finally finishes, Brad’s eyes are completely dark and Ray would think he wasn’t breathing if it wasn’t for the occasional rise of his chest.
“Soon,” he wraps his fingers around the back of Ray’s neck and kisses him. It’s not a promise, it’s a motherfucking guarantee. War or no war, he’s going to be inside Ray soon or he’s going to go insane.
Brad smiles as Ray silently stumbles off in the darkness back to his own grave. At least he found a way to shut him up.
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Date: 2008-10-28 03:42 pm (UTC)eta: I recommended this in my LJ, because this deserves it.
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Date: 2008-10-28 07:34 pm (UTC)Also, Jesus fucking GUH. This fandom has done bad things to me. I've somehow gotten a really-fucking-filthy-sex kink. With, like, talking.
I'm thinking this is Colbert's fault.
Um, right. Coherence. This? Really fucking filthy in all the best ways. Awesomesauce. You win.
(As an aside, I think you accidentally put "Notices" instead of "Noticed" in your subject line.)
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Date: 2008-10-28 09:41 pm (UTC)FilthydirtytalkyBradRay thank you.
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Date: 2008-10-28 10:21 pm (UTC)I would've read this earlier but I didn't have internet for a couple days...
Date: 2008-10-30 01:24 am (UTC)I fully support this endeavor. :)
I snickered when I read the first line.
'How do they expect them not to fuck each other...'
Yeah, for real, dude. I think Poke might be the only truly straight one. But then again, I kinda thought he had a little bit of a thing for Evan and v.v, but that's a whole other discussion.
I *love* that you had Brad referring to Ray as hotass. Because he *is* and he doesn't get credited for that usually.
Ray digging his fingers into Brad's ass is a thing of beauty.
' ''Gonna fuck you one day.'' '
For some reason, finding out this way that they hadn't fucked yet hit me like a blow, in a good way. And I really like that there is a Plan to in the future. Like, it's not even a question.
' ''Fucking christ,'' Brad murmurs, watching in awe...'
I have a kink for Brad being the one in awe of the one he's with.
I love the image of Ray stumbling alone off in a post-sex daze in the dark. There is nothing about that that isn't fun.
Thank you! I think you're the first to do a fully requited Brad/Ray. Going to put this in my memories.
Re: I would've read this earlier but I didn't have internet for a couple days...
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Date: 2008-10-31 12:32 am (UTC)In the beginning, you mention something about the marine corps, you refer to the corps as the corp. The 's' is always present, strangely enough, it's also pronouced core...even though there's a p and s.
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That's all that needs fixing for techincal terms, creative writing wise- I say again, I adore and Lovely.<3
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Date: 2008-11-04 06:14 am (UTC)Brad + Ray = OTP
Loved it!!
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Date: 2008-11-11 08:56 pm (UTC)RAY! YOU GOT YOUR BRAD! \O/
I love and adore Brad/Nate, but I am all *glee* over this, because Ray is delightful and needs love, which Brad TOTALLY DOES. And I think we can all agree that there's enough Brad Colbert to go around.
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Date: 2009-11-24 12:38 am (UTC)This is awesome. YOU'RE awesome.
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Date: 2010-05-13 06:15 pm (UTC)hahaha i'm late to this goat rodeo.. just wanted to say
OH. MY. GOD.
i fucking loved it.
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