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Title: Mimic
Pairing: Gen; Sam
Rating: PG
Prompt: Star Motel for [livejournal.com profile] 100_ghosts
Words: 100
Disclaimer: Kripke is Boss.


Star Motel. Somewhere, Idaho. Dean’s been gone (not dead) eighty-four days and Sam still requests two queens at the front desk.

He pulls the sheets down on the other (Dean’s) bed, puts two toothbrushes by the sink.  When he brushes, he squeezes from the top of the tube and afterward he crawls into the bed closest to the door.

He eats donuts for breakfast, takes his coffee black.  He thinks if he pretends Dean’s still there it won’t hurt like someone ripped his soul out of the gaping hole in his chest where his heart used to be. 

He’s wrong.

Date: 2008-03-26 07:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nephthys101.livejournal.com
Poor Sammy, still requesting two queens. Sad stuff. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 2008-03-28 04:44 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading :)

Date: 2008-03-26 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
Ow.

So much angst in this drabble.

*hugs Sam*

Great look at how Sam's not coping too well after Dean's death.

Favorite lines:

Dean’s been gone (not dead) eighty-four days and Sam still requests two queens at the front desk.

I can definitely see Sam doing this for quite awhile.

He thinks if he pretends Dean’s still there it won’t hurt like someone ripped his soul out of the gaping hole in his chest where his heart used to be.

He’s wrong.


Oh, Sam.

Date: 2008-03-28 04:46 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Thanks for the feedback!

Date: 2008-03-26 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] force-oblique.livejournal.com
Awww!
That was adorable!!
Short and bittersweet!
Poor Sammy trying to get on with his life, continue living without Dean but he just couldnt properly... :(
Thanks for sharing!
Edited Date: 2008-03-26 02:35 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-03-28 05:04 am (UTC)
ext_30154: (jdm - rock on)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading!

Date: 2008-03-28 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] force-oblique.livejournal.com
You are welcome!

Date: 2008-03-26 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silme711.livejournal.com
gaaah. Beautiful.Poor Sammy. *BIGSIGH*

Date: 2008-03-28 05:17 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for reading :)

Date: 2008-03-29 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mad-server.livejournal.com
He pulls the sheets down on the other (Dean’s) bed, puts two toothbrushes by the sink.

Ouch!! It's like Dean is this ghostly limb that's been amputated off of Sam.

Date: 2008-03-31 11:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Oh man, that's exactly what it's like. Thanks for reading!

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