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[withimpunity]

Title: Worship (extended version)
Pairing: Peter/Nathan
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: 26 for 100_wonders
Disclaimer: Heroes belongs to Tim Kring, NBC, and other folks that aren’t me. Only for fun, no profit intended, etc.
Words:  261. Extension of the 100 word drabble I wrote here.

Nathan was like his very own Adonis. Peter could spend all night tracing the veins that wrapped around his brother’s arms with the tips of his fingers, sliding his lips across every square inch of Nathan’s perfect body.  Their mother said Peter “hero worshipped” his older brother.  She had no idea.

“That was fucking amazing Pete,” Nathan said, sliding his fingers through  Peter’s sweat-dampened hair.  “You haven‘t been practicing that with anyone else, have you?”

“Shut up, Nathan,” Peter murmured as he pressed his lips against Nathan‘s throat. 

“I need to get going,” Nathan whispered, placing his hands around Peter’s hips.

“You don’t,” Peter argued petulantly.  “Stay. Please?”

“And how would I explain that to Heidi. Huh?”

Peter stared blankly at Nathan, cocking his head slightly to one side.  “You love her more than me,” He stated, though initially he’d meant for it to come out as a question.

Nathan sighed and pushed Peter off of him.  “Don’t do this.  Not now.”

Peter lied on his back and stared up at the ceiling.  To his right, Nathan sighed and rolled to his side, tipping Peter’s face toward him with his index finger, pushing his tongue into Peter’s mouth as he kissed him hard and rough, laying his claim on him.

“I love you Peter,” he said, stroking Peter’s cheek with the pad of his thumb. “But this ends if you make it into a competition. Understand?”

Peter nodded, but he did not understand.  He would never love anyone the way he loved Nathan.  Maybe their mother had been right all along.  

Comments

[eryslash.livejournal.com]

Oh, like Nathan would be able to END it. He's in denial about it, but of course he's the one less likely to stop. He just needs it as much as Pete does. Mhmmm.
I liked this a lot! And boy, I wish I had my own Adonis!Nathan too.

[oh-mcgee.livejournal.com]

Of course he would never end it AND PETER KNOWS IT. Glad you liked. *gives you your very own Adonis!Nathan*

[dawnie1970.livejournal.com]

Brilliant!

[oh-mcgee.livejournal.com]

Thanks :)

[silme711.livejournal.com]

Peter could spend all night tracing the veins that wrapped around his brother’s arms with the tips of his fingers,
ngh. Got me.

Very nice.
Thanks ♥

[oh-mcgee.livejournal.com]

WOO! Another arm/vein lover!! HIS ARMS ARE FUCKING KILLING ME. HOMG MILO. SERIOUSLY.

[cleverthylacine]

This version is better, and I really love this a lot :)

[oh-mcgee.livejournal.com]

Thank you, it was too hard to get it all in 100 words so I had to post this one too!

[fabrisse.livejournal.com]

Nice. Hot and Nice.

[oh-mcgee.livejournal.com]

Ta :D

[roseganymede.livejournal.com]

Oh.

I just read the 100-word version, and this one was even better, with the tiniest of details making all the difference - Nathan's utterance of "fuck," Nathan as Adonis, the beautiful, sensual body detail...

Yum. Still ouchy, but yum.

[oh-mcgee.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much. It literally pained me to cut it down so much, so I had to post this too. :D

[roseganymede.livejournal.com]

Oh, you're welcome! That's happened to me too :)