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withimpunity ([personal profile] withimpunity) wrote2008-04-10 11:26 am

prompt: Phantom Traveler Coda

Title: Slip Up
Pairing: J2ish
Rating: pg-13 (R possibly for potty mouths)
Words: 100
Prompt: Phantom Traveler coda. Sort of. I hope this is okay.
A/n:  Phantom Traveler commentary transcript by [livejournal.com profile] stir_of_echoes


“Son of a bitch.”

Jensen looks down at the dark crimson staining Jared’s thumb where his knife slipped.  He watches a  ruby red drop slide over the tip, down the ridge of Jared's knuckle, and can feel all the color draining from his face.

“Christ, Jared,” Jensen's voice wobbles and he has to plant a hand on the wing to steady himself.  “Be fucking careful, asshat.”

“You’re going to pass out, aren’t you?” Jared’s fucking grinning at him, bleeding and grinning, and a wave of nausea nearly knocks Jensen off his feet. 

“I hate you,” He groans and promptly swoons.

[identity profile] force-oblique.livejournal.com 2008-04-10 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Jensen...kinda squeamish at the sight of blood? Heeh!!
That was lovely, I enjoyed it!

[identity profile] force-oblique.livejournal.com 2008-04-15 09:30 pm (UTC)(link)
You are welcome, i love all your original ideas! XD

[identity profile] mad-about-dan.livejournal.com 2008-04-10 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome, loved how you pictured the idea of Jared being all calmed and Jensen freaked XD good job
ext_30154: (j2 - la con / wincest)

[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-04-13 08:25 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, thanks! :D

[identity profile] mad-server.livejournal.com 2008-04-12 01:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeee, swooning!Jensen!! Love it!
ext_30154: (jensen - lipbite)

[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-04-13 08:28 am (UTC)(link)
xD Thanks a lot!

[identity profile] nephthys101.livejournal.com 2008-04-15 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
Wickedly funny. "He groans and promptly swoons."--that's the best :)
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-04-16 07:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Heeee thanks xD

[identity profile] kilynn16.livejournal.com 2008-04-17 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha perfect! *tries to imagine Jensen swooning* *cracks the hell up*
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-04-21 05:36 pm (UTC)(link)
;D Who doesn't like a swooning Jensen? Really? Thanks, babe!