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withimpunity ([personal profile] withimpunity) wrote2008-04-01 12:13 pm

spn drabble: first step toward exile

Title: First Step Toward Exile
Pairing: Gen; Sam
Rating: PG
Words: 100
Prompt: Forbidden Fruit for [livejournal.com profile] 100_ghosts
Disclaimer: All your Sammeh are belong to Kripke.


Sam’s hands trembled.  He could feel the blood rushing in his ears, feel droplets of sweat slide down the back of his neck.  If he did this, there would be no turning back. 

Quickly, he scribbled across the dotted line in a handwriting that looked nothing like his own.

John Winchester.

He knew Dad was going to be pissed when he found out, but that afternoon he just ran, the wind his face and the ground under his feet.  Dean was waiting for him when he was done.

“I made the team.”

“Hope it’s worth it.”

It was. Every second. 

[identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Good job with the prompt. I like how Sam crosses that line with a little bit of nervousness but then doesn't regret it later. That's just what I'd expect from Sam at this age, to be wary of stepping out on his own but then realize he needs to do that, wants to do that, and it all leads to Stanford, of course.

Oh, Winchesters.

Nicely done.
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I like this prompt because all the taboo things that are forbidden to most people are normal for Winchesters, and what's normal to most people is forbidden to Winchesters. o.O

lol. Thank you!

[identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
I like this prompt because all the taboo things that are forbidden to most people are normal for Winchesters, and what's normal to most people is forbidden to Winchesters

Exactly. And it makes me all "Oh, Winchesters."

[identity profile] mad-server.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 05:36 pm (UTC)(link)
That's awesome!
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Glad you thought so!

[identity profile] force-oblique.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 08:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww definat weee!Sam!!
Lovely!
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
He is a rebel, isn't he? thanks

[identity profile] force-oblique.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
lol
He is!!

[identity profile] miconic.livejournal.com 2008-04-06 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
Sam, and the soccer team perhaps? I believe that it was worth it too, all around. Thanks for sharing the fic. I like my Sammy rebellious, within reason, of course ;)
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-04-09 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
Definitely sam and the soccer team. Thanks for reading :)