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Title: can’t find the words
Pairing: gen; wee!dean, john
Rating: G
Words: 100
Prompt: Dead in the Water Coda for [livejournal.com profile] 100_ghosts
A/n: See, when I was your age, I saw something real bad happen to my mom, and I was scared, too. I didn't feel like talking, just like you.


“Dean? C’mon, buddy.” John kneels down until he’s eye level with Dean.  “Talk to me, kiddo.”

Dean only stares at him, like he’s waiting for John to say something.  John wishes there was something he could say. 

It’s been three months since that night, three months since Dean’s spoken to anyone.  Only, that’s not entirely true.

John listens at night when he’s pretending to be asleep, cracks open one eye to catch Dean climbing over the crib railing to hold Sammy next to him.

“It’s okay, Sammy,” He can hear Dean whispering.  “I won’t ever let nothin’ happen to you.”

Date: 2008-03-31 09:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] junalele.livejournal.com
Awesome!!

Date: 2008-03-31 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] junalele.livejournal.com
You are so welcome. Heh.

Date: 2008-03-31 09:43 pm (UTC)
ext_1770: @ _jems_ (fandom: spn mea culpa)
From: [identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com
Beautiful! I can just see this, John barely holding back the tears as he listens in on Dean whispering to Sam.

Date: 2008-03-31 10:44 pm (UTC)
ext_30154: (spn - be my brother again)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
I know :( I can still see Dean talking to little Sammy when he thinks no one else is noticing, because he feels more connected to him than ever after carrying him out of the house. *hugs all the boys* Thank you for reading. ♥

Date: 2008-03-31 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fiorediloto.livejournal.com
I just feel the sudden need to say that "weechester" is possible the beautifulest word in the world.

Date: 2008-03-31 10:48 pm (UTC)
ext_30154: (ilu)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Ehehehe. Do you read it or is it something you just came across and was like, OH! SHINY! :p

Date: 2008-03-31 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] exd-fic.livejournal.com
Oh my, this is lovely.
Wonderful piece, hon!

Date: 2008-03-31 10:50 pm (UTC)
ext_30154: (jensen - lipbite)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you liked it! :)

Date: 2008-03-31 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigfiction.livejournal.com
Silent little Dean crawling into Sammy's crib and holding him and whispering comforting words. I worship at the altar of McGee's keyboard.

Date: 2008-03-31 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
“It’s okay, Sammy,” He can hear Dean whispering. “I won’t ever let nothin’ happen to you.”

Oh, Dean. I like that he briefly rallies for Sammy's sake.

Nicely done. Makes me want to hug them all.

Date: 2008-04-01 01:03 am (UTC)
ext_30154: (Default)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Me too! Poor tortured boys. :( Unfortunately, its probably just going to get worse for them.

Date: 2008-04-01 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
*nods* They have such a tough road ahead.

Date: 2008-04-01 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cosmicavatar.livejournal.com
Awwwwwww, wee!Protective!Dean! *squishes*

Date: 2008-04-01 11:45 pm (UTC)
ext_30154: (Default)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Isn't he adorably adorable? Thanks for reading!

Date: 2008-04-01 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silme711.livejournal.com
Awww. Poor wee!Dean...and poor John omg! *huggles both*

That was soooo beautiful ♥

Date: 2008-04-01 11:46 pm (UTC)
ext_30154: (spn - boy king)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Thank you! ♥

Date: 2008-04-04 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brin-bailey.livejournal.com
Aww. *sniff*

Date: 2008-04-04 11:48 pm (UTC)
ext_30154: (Default)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
I know, poor tortured weechesters. *sniff* Thanks for reading. :)

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