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withimpunity ([personal profile] withimpunity) wrote2008-03-16 01:06 pm
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spn drabble: Family - Sam, Dean - PG

Title: Family
Pairing: None. Sam, Dean
Rating: PG
Prompt: 1.01 Coda for [livejournal.com profile] 100_ghosts
Words:100
Disclaimer: All your Sam and Dean are belong to Kripke & Co.


Four years. Four years and with Sam riding shotgun, bitching about the immoralities of hustling and scams, it barely feels like four days. Dean catches himself grinning for no reason in particular, feels his body thrum with a familiar energy whenever he and Sam discuss the hunt. Feels like family.

Sam’s constant reminders of Monday never reach Dean’s ears. He stops the car in California and is confused when Sam just leaves. Again. Doesn’t look back.  Dean’s knuckles split open when his fist makes contact with the dash, numb, like the black hole in his chest. 

Feels just like family.
ext_1770: @ _jems_ (fandom: spn since i was four)

[identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com 2008-03-16 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I love the way you capture the dichotomy of their relationship - the intense love, and at the same the frustration they get with each other.
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-03-16 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much :)

[identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com 2008-03-16 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nicely done. Great job going from the high of being back with Sam to the low of Sam walking away again. And I love how you repeated that line, "Feels just like family." Very effective.
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-03-16 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I wanted to include something about feeling guilty about being happy after Jess died, since he had Sam with him again...but y'know, 100 words. ;D

[identity profile] girlmostlikely.livejournal.com 2008-03-18 11:48 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, poor Dean! He just... CAN'T understand Sam leaving, can he? *sigh*
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-03-18 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Dean-o. :(