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Title: An Interesting Turn of Events
Pairing: Brad/Ray
Rating: Adult
Words: 272


"Shit, Ray," Brad's fingers dig into Ray's hips when he pushes inside of him, groaning. "Your little bitch ass is tight as fuck, Jesus."

Brad snaps his hips forward and Ray muffles a scream with his fist, riding it out. "I spent six fucking weeks thinking about how hot and tight you'd be, Ray," Brad says, flattening his palm out across Ray's back, already slick with sweat, splaying his fingers out across the sinewy muscle. "What kind of sounds you'd make when I pushed my cock inside your little asshole."

"Jesus, Brad!" Ray yelps when Brad reaches around and swipes his thumb over the head of his cock. Ray pushes his hips back, pulling Brad deeper inside, and he hears the little hiss of air that escapes Brad's mouth.

"My first combat jack in Iraq was to your fucking mouth and all the ways I could get you to shut the hell up," Brad tells him, jerking Ray's cock slowly as he slides nearly all the way out, then shoves back in again, hard.

"Fuck-"

"I listened to you jerk off in the humvee sometimes, when you thought I was asleep. You have no idea how bad I wanted to reach over and finish you off and lick your come from between my fingers, and-"

"Brad-"

"-grab your fucking head and make you swallow my dick-"

"Brad-"

"fuck your mouth till it was sore and bruised, maybe then you wouldn't talk so fucking much."

"Brad."

"What, Ray?"

"If its not too much to ask, could you shut the fuck up and fuck me already? Jesus Christ, you talk a lot."

Date: 2008-12-09 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shiplessheathen.livejournal.com
I like when you do what I say and post stuff all over the internet! THIS IS GOOD STUFF. HOORAY FOR MY PROMPT. ♥

ps here have my Sandy icon because she's hot like burning.

Date: 2008-12-10 01:46 am (UTC)
ext_30154: ([alexander] scruffy askars is scruffy)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
NOM THAT IS A PRETTY ICON AND YES, HOORAY FOR YOUR PROMPT! \o/

Date: 2008-12-09 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peopleareshapes.livejournal.com
OH GOOD GOD. SO AMAZINGLY HOT. I CANNOT EXPRESS MY THOUGHTS ON THIS FIC IN ANYTHING LESS THAN CAPS. A+, YOU.

Date: 2008-12-09 11:31 pm (UTC)
ext_30154: ([gk] bad ass motherfucker)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
EHE YOUR ICON IS AMAZING. Thank you, bb. :D

Date: 2008-12-09 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] redheadaholic.livejournal.com
This is both HOT and HILARIOUS, which is my favorite combination! Great job.

Date: 2008-12-09 11:31 pm (UTC)
ext_30154: ([gk] brad can fly)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Hee, glad you liked it!!

Date: 2008-12-09 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thelackoflight.livejournal.com
Can I just applaud you for a second? Because you're amazing for writing this and like two other excellent Brad/Ray fics. I love all the Brad/Nate fic a lot but I can never say no to these marrieds.

Anyway, GUUUH DAMN HOT. THE LAST LINE = ♥. I have no real words other than that? Sorry, haha.

Date: 2008-12-09 11:33 pm (UTC)
ext_30154: ([gk] brad does things)
From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Brad/Nate was my first love, but after more viewing of the show I was like, BRAD/RAY R MARRIED GUYZ. They're so cute and I love them like burning. I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2008-12-10 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elzed.livejournal.com
Hot and dirty and hilarious. Just how I like my men. ;)

Date: 2008-12-10 05:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Hehe, me too! Thanks for reading! :D

Date: 2008-12-10 10:39 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-12 12:08 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-06-16 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] extraho-606.livejournal.com
*lol* interesting turn of events alright!! Imagine ray telling brad to shut up...*chuckles*

Date: 2009-09-20 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] timeofnoreply.livejournal.com
Hee! The last line completely got me. Awesome fic.

Date: 2009-11-24 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deloused-drunk.livejournal.com
Awesome :D You really know how to do a proper PWP fic... Much kudos!

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