Oh... the angst. I love it. I FINALLY GOT TIME TO READ IT! I'm so happy!
You did a very good job characterizing the brothers, I believe, especially Sam. And you've been creating some very nice tension, yeah? Mmm...
There's something about beginning and ending this part with Sam's displeasure with the bed that made me all happy inside though. *giggles* It just fit very well and characterized Sam's emotions in a way that sums up everything that just happened and sets the tone for who he is in the next part. Which I will get to ASAP. But now I have to sleep, damnit.
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Date: 2008-11-20 06:51 am (UTC)You did a very good job characterizing the brothers, I believe, especially Sam. And you've been creating some very nice tension, yeah? Mmm...
There's something about beginning and ending this part with Sam's displeasure with the bed that made me all happy inside though. *giggles* It just fit very well and characterized Sam's emotions in a way that sums up everything that just happened and sets the tone for who he is in the next part. Which I will get to ASAP. But now I have to sleep, damnit.