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Title: Phantom Pains
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: none; gen
Words: 100
Prompt: Phantom picture prompt for 100_ghosts
Disclaimer: All your dysfunctional Winchesters are belong to Kripke.



“This isn’t what I had in mind when I told you to take care of my wheels, Sammy.”

Sam lays on the gas and crosses the state line.

“Don’t trust her, Sam. Don’t you fucking trust that bitch.”


Ruby’s brand new meat suit smiles, like she knows.  When they get in the car, Sam makes her sit in the back.

“God damnit, Sammy!” Dean screams in his face.  He‘s so close Sam can see the brown flecks in his eyes. “You’re doing exactly what they want!”

“I have to!” Sam roars and reaches out with both hands.

No one’s there.

Date: 2008-10-14 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jameserin.livejournal.com
OH SAM.

WAY TO KILL ME A LOT.

Date: 2008-10-14 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com
Poor ruined Sammy. Put him back together now? Please?

Date: 2008-10-14 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
Nicely done. Very good use of the prompt to show how Dean's still there even when he's not, and I especially love the bit about Sam not letting Ruby sit in the front passenger seat.

Date: 2008-10-15 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wingsunfurled.livejournal.com
MY HEART!!!

OH SAMMY!!!

Date: 2008-10-15 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kilynn16.livejournal.com
OHHH, SAM.

*goes to happy place in which SamnDean do nothing but eat candy and mack on each other all day*

Date: 2008-10-15 04:26 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
*hugs you and Sammy*

Date: 2008-10-15 04:27 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
I'll let Dean do that. ;)

Date: 2008-10-15 04:28 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Thank you, it was pretty cryptic, so I'm glad it worked for you.

Date: 2008-10-15 04:31 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
:( Everything's going to be okay. I do believe this, I do. I do.

Date: 2008-10-15 04:45 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Lol, this comment made me giggle! ILU.

Date: 2008-10-15 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wingsunfurled.livejournal.com
Yeah but first we will need to kidnap and tie Kripke up and write our own ending. Somehow I don't see him as a happily ever after kind of guy.

Date: 2008-10-15 09:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cosmicavatar.livejournal.com
Ai ai ai. I am afeared for the brothers, I really am.

Date: 2008-10-16 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenrants.livejournal.com
The internal dialogue is spot on, very nice.

Date: 2008-10-19 08:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nephthys101.livejournal.com
Oh poor SAM. I feel that this is on spot cannon. I loved the dialogue in his head.

Date: 2008-10-22 07:45 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Thank you very much

Date: 2008-10-22 07:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com
Thank you!

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