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withimpunity ([personal profile] withimpunity) wrote2008-10-14 02:34 pm
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my fic: Phantom Pains - Sam - PG-13

Title: Phantom Pains
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: none; gen
Words: 100
Prompt: Phantom picture prompt for 100_ghosts
Disclaimer: All your dysfunctional Winchesters are belong to Kripke.



“This isn’t what I had in mind when I told you to take care of my wheels, Sammy.”

Sam lays on the gas and crosses the state line.

“Don’t trust her, Sam. Don’t you fucking trust that bitch.”


Ruby’s brand new meat suit smiles, like she knows.  When they get in the car, Sam makes her sit in the back.

“God damnit, Sammy!” Dean screams in his face.  He‘s so close Sam can see the brown flecks in his eyes. “You’re doing exactly what they want!”

“I have to!” Sam roars and reaches out with both hands.

No one’s there.

[identity profile] jameserin.livejournal.com 2008-10-14 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
OH SAM.

WAY TO KILL ME A LOT.

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2008-10-14 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor ruined Sammy. Put him back together now? Please?

[identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com 2008-10-14 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Nicely done. Very good use of the prompt to show how Dean's still there even when he's not, and I especially love the bit about Sam not letting Ruby sit in the front passenger seat.

[identity profile] wingsunfurled.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
MY HEART!!!

OH SAMMY!!!

[identity profile] kilynn16.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
OHHH, SAM.

*goes to happy place in which SamnDean do nothing but eat candy and mack on each other all day*
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
*hugs you and Sammy*
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
I'll let Dean do that. ;)
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 04:28 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, it was pretty cryptic, so I'm glad it worked for you.
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
:( Everything's going to be okay. I do believe this, I do. I do.
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
Lol, this comment made me giggle! ILU.

[identity profile] wingsunfurled.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 05:06 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah but first we will need to kidnap and tie Kripke up and write our own ending. Somehow I don't see him as a happily ever after kind of guy.

[identity profile] cosmicavatar.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Ai ai ai. I am afeared for the brothers, I really am.

[identity profile] ravenrants.livejournal.com 2008-10-16 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
The internal dialogue is spot on, very nice.

[identity profile] nephthys101.livejournal.com 2008-10-19 08:57 am (UTC)(link)
Oh poor SAM. I feel that this is on spot cannon. I loved the dialogue in his head.
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-10-22 07:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much
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[identity profile] oh-mcgee.livejournal.com 2008-10-22 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!