Date: 2008-04-17 07:55 am (UTC)
1. I love your details. The bubblegum pink nails and how she's really coming on to Dean. Very vivid. I love the way Dean never lets Sam out of his sight. Sam's fourteen?!LOL. It sounds like Dean.
2.The imagery of Sam crumbling to the dirt is awesome. So is Bobby without his hat, defeated and weary. Wonderful.
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