Date: 2008-03-02 11:24 pm (UTC)
This is so lovely. The last paragraph especially, and the way you tie the memories they have of each other, their sense of each other in the world, to the taste and smell of salt; you ground their feelings of love and home in the earth, and it's gorgeous.
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