This is an illegal amount of so many delicious wrongs that are oh, so right....

I think I flatlined for a minute there.

This was incredibly hot - so hot I want to cut off my hands ;)

Peter's blushing red embarassment at the beginning...Guh, humiliation kink alone would've done it for me, but then Nathan gets turned on, and Christ, the fact that it's his brother in his daughter's cheerleading uniform - it doesn't get anymore deliciously twisted than that. Well, until they get cum on it, that is.

I hate how a lot of first-time fics ignore the pain or else are too, too angsty, and this was just the right mix of realism and dirty fun. I love that we get to see Peter's pain, that you don't gloss over the pain of having sex for the first time like this, especially without out lube for God's sake, but Peter wants this so much he deals with the pain, and even Nathan sort of picks up on it, but takes what he wants anyway. Speaks volumes...

And mostly, I'm just a pile of goo right now. And the end was just perfect. Amazing fic, hun!