“I love you like this,” Brad murmurs. To anyone else it would be unclear which one of them he was referring to, but they know: he means both of them. He loves it when Nate’s obedient and submissive, but he loves him like this too, so turned on and desperate for him and Ray, so wild that even Brad can’t predict what he’s going to do next. And he loves Ray the most when he’s a mouthy little fuck, talking filth and being a little bitch about everything, but when he’s like this, pliant and loose and just theirs, Brad thinks he’s never seen anything so gorgeous in his life.
I love that paragraph! I like how it's worded to let the reader know without a doubt this is not the first time they've done this nor will it be the last.
“Yeah you are,” Nate whispers just to him, like its their secret. “We both are. We're Brad’s whores.”
Ray doesn't argue.
That was a wonderful way to end it! This whole thing was perfect and definitely one of the things that I was looking for. Thank you for answering one of my prompts! :D
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Date: 2010-09-30 06:16 pm (UTC)I love that paragraph! I like how it's worded to let the reader know without a doubt this is not the first time they've done this nor will it be the last.
“Yeah you are,” Nate whispers just to him, like its their secret. “We both are. We're Brad’s whores.”
Ray doesn't argue.
That was a wonderful way to end it! This whole thing was perfect and definitely one of the things that I was looking for. Thank you for answering one of my prompts! :D