You nailed it on their voices. This was very in character. Kudos my friend! I loved it! Very hot! I was in a foul mood earlier and this just brightened up my day! Thank you!
Ohh, I noticed that you put this: "Nathan’s head fell forehead" You meant forward, right? Just thought I'd let you know.
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Date: 2007-12-21 05:41 am (UTC)Ohh, do I smell a sequel? I surely do hope so!
You nailed it on their voices. This was very in character. Kudos my friend! I loved it! Very hot! I was in a foul mood earlier and this just brightened up my day! Thank you!
Ohh, I noticed that you put this:
"Nathan’s head fell forehead"
You meant forward, right? Just thought I'd let you know.